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Just clips grabs and meshed into a movie.  Any tips from the experts (arent we all?) on how to improve, gratefully appreciated.

 

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Raptorattacker
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Think of storyline,who's the main plane, what they're doing/going to do.

Show them on the way, show the enemy/destination/objective

Show the 'event' (the MAIN part of the movie, the most action-packed)

Show the result/ the epilogue (going home/crashing/limping/eating sandwiches etc)...

Roll credits and CAN IT!!

Simple.

Good footage and format you got there but it's just random/disjointed.

Any help?

 

Rap

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:salute:

Edited by Raptorattacker
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Posted

:popcorm: deserves an academy........ with the scratchy film, I would of muted the colors a tad to sell it's authenticity. Subtitles or audio track to define what the story line is.

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Posted

Thanks to you both. Those points are excellent. Ill take all on board and apply to the next one. Cheers.

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