OberLeutantGarretson Posted May 7, 2019 Posted May 7, 2019 I started making a new miniseries called Up In The Skies I will be making some cinematics, guncams, and storylines. My editing is not the greatest but it's getting there. New video every MONDAY. Come support the channel! Hope you guys all enjoy it. I love watching the community videos, and content. Comment some of you're videos and screenshots! I want to see them! 4 1 5
unreasonable Posted May 7, 2019 Posted May 7, 2019 Oberleutnant. Not sold on using two different Gothic fonts - or any Gothic font in a purportedly British film from WW2. Your accent is not really 1940's RP. Possibly better to skip the voice over and just use subtitles: either way, use one or the other, not both. The film is very authentic looking!
OberLeutantGarretson Posted May 7, 2019 Author Posted May 7, 2019 (edited) 12 minutes ago, unreasonable said: Oberleutnant. Not sold on using two different Gothic fonts - or any Gothic font in a purportedly British film from WW2. Your accent is not really 1940's RP. Possibly better to skip the voice over and just use subtitles: either way, use one or the other, not both. The film is very authentic looking! Appreciate the feedback! I love the honesty man. I'm definitely in the beginning stages of learning the "director" way and the correct font, wording, etc during that era. The voice over, it was a last minute thing I thought I could use for some laughs! Had my buddy record it and had some fun with it. I'm also a new video editor. Fonts, and the way movies were directed during ww2 was not something I never really "observed in great detail" in my years learning about ww2, I mean who does? You're too busy learning about the battles! It's all for fun though! Have some laughs, watch some cheesy films! Trust me, I really appreciate the feedback for sure! Keep it coming! Most of all, I hope you were able to enjoy a bit of it, crack a smile and let out a WOAH! Edited May 7, 2019 by OberLeutantGarretson
Poochnboo Posted May 7, 2019 Posted May 7, 2019 You needed some RAF banter in there! "They pranged his cabbage crate right in the how's your father and he dickey birded straight into the briney!" 1
OberLeutantGarretson Posted May 7, 2019 Author Posted May 7, 2019 5 minutes ago, Poochnboo said: You needed some RAF banter in there! "They pranged his cabbage crate right in the how's your father and he dickey birded straight into the briney!" Trust me. The next one I make I will! Its was like pulling a tooth to get my buddy to say those lines. So maybe he will warm up the next go. They will get better the more I make them! Lol
OberLeutantGarretson Posted May 9, 2019 Author Posted May 9, 2019 Thank you all for the feedback! I'm slowly doing more research to improve my quality of content, and authenticity.
Herne Posted May 14, 2019 Posted May 14, 2019 I enjoyed it, voice over and all As for banter this will make you laugh if you havent seen it :-
OberLeutantGarretson Posted May 14, 2019 Author Posted May 14, 2019 Thank you man! I'm going to check this out now lol
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