The Yak-1B

[ShamrockOneFive]

Hey folks,

 

Always appreciated the great videos that people post in this section and I thought I should try and do one myself. I'm off for the holidays and I'm getting the creative juices flowing with a early edit of my video. I'm used to using Final Cut Pro at work but I have Premier CS6 at home so I thought it was time to learn Premier a bit. I'm intending to do a second edit of the video with titles and the like but I'm not there yet. I thought I'd show off what I've done so far, get some critique from you guys, and see what you think.

 

Enjoy!

 

[ShamrockOneFive]

Good? Bad? Terrible?

[andyw248]

Well done!

 

Here's what I like: Short sequences; good variety of different perspectives; in most scenes the camera is stationary while the objects move; engaging alternation between cockpit views, external views, and ground views.

 

Some feedback:

The sequences starting at 0:43 and at 1:04 look a little odd (compared to all the other scenes) because that F2 viewpoint isn't really good at realistically catching a maneuvering - in real life it's impossible to see things this way; I'd suggest to capture this kind of action from a greater distance as a human observer would.

[ShamrockOneFive]

Great feedback andy! Something to work on for sure! Thank you!